Here is my review of the sequel, as promised! I'm a Brony of my word. At almost twice the word count, it's definitely more content!
Author: psychicscubadiver
"When the Brony International Guard came to town Lyra thought all of hers dreams had come true. Finally, she had proof that nopony could argue with. But there's something strange about these creatures who call themselves 'bronies'. It isn't just their weird humor or quirky behavior. They're keeping secrets from everypony, and only Lyra seems to notice, or even care. None of investigations have solved this mystery just yet, but with the arrival of some new divisions, she may finally have the chance she needs..."The Brony Guard Unlimited
Kick the tires and light the fires, after the break!